Friday 20 March 2015

Monsters attack


Once there was a terrible problem something big ugly scary and made out of gooey stuff and strong even he could camouflage him and his army.He was so angry and even he poops a lot.His poos OOH and his poos are fire.This 21 year he just joined.Then 1 sec.He saw thousands of guys joined the army.1 Woman she was beautiful like an angel.That gugs name was:Derrick rose who just joined.All the ladies thought he was very very handsome.Very then a big CATOMBAL it made our basement on fire.10000000000000000000 died.The boss and the comando even derrick rose escaped.When they got out a laser aiming to derick.Derick ran until the commando and boss saved Dericks live are you.But they died.Derick put on paint on his face.Derek took off his shirt and ran to save the whole wide world.He kilt 1000000000000000000000000000000 of ALIENS and MONSTERS.But one was left to fight he was tremendous stupendous:true munges the BIGGEST GIANT IN THE HOLE WIDE WORLD.First Derick jumped like the HULK.Then smashed like the HULK then jumped so high that he jump so far when the giant shouted”where are you’’i screamed’’HULK SMASH’’,i punched just like mike tyson.after a while the giant DIED.All the people cheered’’whooooooo,’’ “nice’’, “yeah’’, “ohh my gosh’’, “THANK YOU DERRICK ROSE.The people cheered like a baby.’’i saved the world.He became one of the famous superheroes in the world.Every one wanted his name because he was so famous superheros.THE END BYE.By Canaan Faumui.

4 comments:

  1. Nice story Canaan!!
    Keep it up!!
    By your sister Faith

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    1. Nice Canaan
      keep it up mate
      gabe

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  2. good story Canaan because you tried hard Daneil

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  3. That's a relly good story canna.Frome Eddie

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